Just as an example:
Looks better as:
“If you’re so eager, why don’t you come hump my boot?”
I froze, completely caught off guard, contemplating the seriousness of her tone. I wasn’t able to think for long before she continued, “It wasn’t a suggestion, slut. Come here.”
Or:
“If you’re so eager, why don’t you come hump my boot?”
I froze, completely caught off guard, contemplating the seriousness of her tone. I wasn’t able to think for long.
She continued, “It wasn’t a suggestion, slut. Come here.”
I am not a punctuation Nazi at all, but those ways are less distracting to even readers like me.