I recently posted the story "An Unwilling Bride" under the name ditzylilgirl and located here: http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/s...p?storyid=9260

Since I haven't really done much writing, especially about this kind of thing, I was wondering if anyone had anything thoughts on it. I'm looking for comments on the idea of it, writing style, description and dialogue and stuff like that, and to be honest if it was, you know, hot.

Anything else you can think of to comment on would be helpful as well as any suggestions you may have.

Thanks!