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Sub with a twist

Part 1

slave walked slowly to her car from the store carrying some shopping bags enjoying the warm sun on her face and the smell of spring in the air. she pulled out her keys to unlock the door when suddenly a low voice growled in her ear, "Don't move or make a sound. you are going to do exactly as you are told." she immediately recognized her Master's voice and scent.
she stiffened, bags and keys falling to the floor as she felt a sharp cold point at the small of her back and knew he had a knife. her legs started to tremble and her breath quickened as she felt her Master's breath at the nape of her neck. she knew He was angry with her as she had stormed out on Him earlier on in the day vowing to never return....now she had to take her punishment.
 
she felt His mouth on her neck teasing her gently and then bite her as He pressed the knife harder into her back. her nipples grew erect, a delicious pulse commenced between her legs.
 
"Master is very disappointed slave. Now you have to take your punishment. you are going to walk over to My car and get in. Do not argue with Me or it will be worse for you." He took hold of her arm, tightly squeezing it as her pulled her along. As he searched for His keys His grip loosened on her arm and she pushed Him away and bolted in panic. she did not hear footsteps behind her nor did he utter a word.
 
slave ran to her car and picked the keys up off the ground. her hands shook as she tried to unlock the door but finally managed to do it, got in and locked all the doors. she looked around, he was nowhere in sight. she started the car and drove away, constantly looking in her rear view mirror. There was still no sign of Him.
 
slave drove for a while before she pulled over to the side of a deserted road to calm down. she sat with her head back and her eyes closed. she fell asleep and was awakened by a horn, she saw her Master's car beside hers. she  tried to drive away but heard the screech of tires and was blocked. Master quickly got out of his car, the expression on His face sent a chill up her spine and she knew she had gone too far. "OPEN THE DOOR NOW!!" The look in Master's eyes coupled with His commanding tone made her obey Him immediately.
 
As soon as the door unlocked it was swung open,  He pulled her roughly out of the car  by her hair. she stumbled and fell to the ground at Master's feet. she looked up and Him and received a stinging blow across her cheek. "No...please don't!" He struck her face again and again until tears streamed from her eyes. her cries were pitiful but Master was not moved by this. He grabbed a handful of hair and pulled her up to her feet.  "Look at me slave." she was too ashamed to look Him in the eyes. He painfully pulled her head back by her hair until their eyes met.
 
she looked into his cold angry eyes defiantly and started to struggle, her knee connected painfully between His legs. Master emitted a loud roar and lost his grip on her. slave ran frantically to her car. The keys....oh god where are the keys?!? He must have taken them! she screamed as she felt her dress being ripped off of her body from behind. His hand went around her throat while the other squeezed her breast making her whimper. 
 
.......she was dragged into a wooded area by the remaining fragments of her dress tripping and falling over rocks and branches. He mercilessly pulled her up each time, the fabric cutting into her skin. Master finally stopped and pushed her down to the ground. He stood over her trembling body and pulled a roll of duct tape out of his pocket. "Like it or not, you are going to learn to respect me bitch."
slave screamed and shook her head from side to side as He tried to cover her mouth. He sat on her chest, rocks and twigs dug into her back as His weight crushed her to the ground. He slapped her repeatedly until her struggles ceased and duct taped her mouth. He put his hands around her neck and pulled her up choking her as she stood before him. 
 
she caught a glimpse of shiny metal and once again felt a sharp point slowly sliding up her stomach and then RIP! He cut the remaining fragments of dress off her body. "Mmmmmm nice bra slave." He slid the knife under her bra strap and chuckled when she winced as the knife nipped her skin. The bra was cut and ripped off her body. she glared at him wanting nothing more than to punch His face in at that moment. she lunged at Him knocking Him to the ground.


To be continued…



 


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