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Story 14 Nick's Lucky Day

                                NICK'S LUCKY DAY
                                by V.P. Viddler

      "All right, Jill. It's humiliation time. I'm going to show you off."

      "Barry --"

      "What."

      "I don't want to."

      "I know that. That's what makes it fun."

      "Barry, if I --"

      "Jill."

      "I'm sorry. All right. I'm sorry."

      "Sit down. Now. Who do you think is the most unattractive boy in this
school?"

      "Oh god -- Barry --"

      "Jill."

      "I'm sorry."

      "Truth, Jill. Only truth."

      "Yes, Barry."

      "Who is it?"

      "Nick Anastopalis."

      "All right. Call him."

      "I -- All right."

      "Tell him I'm inviting him to watch your humiliation."

      "Nick? It's Jill. Jill Darling. Barry is inviting you to watch my
humiliation. Right now. All right."

      "Good. Ah, Nick. Sit down. You know Jill, right?"

      "Sure."

      "You think Jill is good-looking? Sexy?"

      "Hell, yes."

      "Ah. But Jill doesn't think that of you, Nick. Jill thinks you're the
most unattractive boy in this school."

      "Well, shit."

      "And that's why I think you should watch Jill's humiliation. And be a
part of it. Wouldn't you like that, Nick?"

      "Damn Christ hell yes, I would. But what in the world --"

      "Ah. I'll explain. You see, Jill is mine. All mine. I own her. I control
her. She's my little Jill-toy, my plaything. Anything I say, Jill does.
Anything. Anything at all. Isn't that right, Jill?"

      "Yes, Barry."

      "Tell Nick."

      "Barry owns me. I'm his Jill-toy. Anything he wants, I do. Anything at
all."

      "Christ almighty!"

      "Now, Nick, I'm going to demonstrate that. Jill and I. Right, Jill?"

      "I -- if you say so, Barry."

      "Jill -- if I told you to go down on your knees, right now, and suck my
cock for me, what would you do?"

      "I -- I'd do it, Barry."

      "Christ!"

      "But watch this, Nick. Jill baby, if I told you to get down on the floor
on your knees, right now, and suck Nick's cock, what would you do?"

      "Barry --"

      "What, Jill?"

      "I -- I'd -- I'd do it, Barry."

      "How about that, Nick?"

      "Holy H. Jesus Christ! Damn!"

      "Would you enjoy doing that, Jill?"

      "No."

      "No? But you'd do it anyway, right?"

      "Yes."

      "Do it, Jesus, yes, do it!"

      "Not so fast, Nick. Let's start with something slower. Okay? A little
appetizer, you might say. Now Jill. Jill baby. If I told you to get down on
your hands and knees and crawl across the room for me, what would you do?"

      "I'd do it, Barry."

      "Why?"

      "Because you told me to, Barry."

      "Ah. And if I told you to put that sweet mouth down on the floor and lick
the dirt off it, until I tell you to stop, what would you do?"

      "I -- I'd do it."

      "All right, Jill. Show us."

      "What?"

      "Do it, Jill. Get down on all fours, like the fine little animal you are,
and crawl for us. And then lick the dirty floor as long as I want you to. Do
it, Jill. Now."

      "Barry --"

      "Jill."

      "All -- all right."

      "Jesus H. Christ, she -- she's doing it. She's crawling. Look at that! My
god! And she's -- she's doing it. She's licking the floor. Look at that tongue
licking the dirt, Christ! I can't stand it!"

      "All right, Jill. Stop now. Come back and sit down. Thank Nick for
watching you degrade yourself."

      "I -- Thank you, Nick."

      "For what?"

      "For watching me degrade myself."

      "Ask Nick if he wouldn't like to see more."

      "Barry --"

      "What?"

      "Barry pleaese --"

      "Jill."

      "I'm sorry. I'm sorry."

      "Ask him."

      "Nick, would you like to see more?"

      "Hell, yes! Christ, would I!"

      "Do you like Jill's body, Nick?"

      "Barry --"

      "Damn! Do I? What a body! What tits! What legs! Shit! Do I want it!"

      "Jill."

      "Yes, Barry."

      "Show him your breasts."

      "Oh. Barry. I. Please. I."

      "Jill."

      "Barry, please. Please. I can't --"

      "Jill."

      "Yes."

      "Have you ever had your breasts whipped?"

      "My -- my breasts?"

      "Yes. Your breasts. Those luscious round curving things that are pushing
your top out that way. Did you ever have them whipped?"

      "N-no."

      "I'd like to whip them, Jill."

      "Barry --"

      "I would. And if I want to I will. Isn't that right, Jill?"

      "Yes, Barry."

      "And I know Nick would love to watch it. I could do it right here. I
could tie you up so you couldn't move, and gag you so you couldn't scream and
lay you back across this table and whip and whip and whip your breasts until I
got tired, and then Nick could do it. Is that what you want, Jill?"

      "No, Barry. No."

      "Show Nick your tits."

      "I -- All right. All right."

      "She's -- oh shit, oh my Christ, no bra, oh fuck look at that! Ah,
fantastic! All bare, and Christ what nipples."

      "Don't cover them, Jill. Stay that way."

      "She's crying."

      "I know."

      "Jesus, she's crying. Can I touch them?"

      "Jill, Nick wants to feel your breasts. What do you say?"

      "Ask -- ask Barry."

      "That's a good girl. Do you want Nick to touch them?"

      "No."

      "Then tell him he can."

      "You -- you can touch them, Nick."

      "Damn, that's good. Ah shit, that's so nice. I -- I want to squeeze them.
Damn, I want to crush these gorgeous things as hard as I can."

      "Do it."

      "No, Barry, no, please, please, don't let him, please. AARRGHHH! AARGH."

      "That's enough, Nick. You can hurt Jill more later."

      "Can I?"

      "Yes."

      "Can I fuck her?"

      "Jill?"

      "Barry, I'll do anything. I'll do anything you say."

      "You will anyway, Jill. Won't you?"

      "Yes, Barry."

      "So if I tell Nick that he can hurt you, he can hurt you. Isn't that
right, Jill?"

      "Yes, Barry."

      "Tell him that."

      "If -- if Barry says you can hurt me, you can hurt me."

      "And if I say he can fuck you?"

      "If Barry says you can fuck me, you can fuck me."

      "Jill, pull your skirt up. Pull it up so Nick can see your legs. All the
way up. That's it. Higher. Higher. Show him your thighs. Don't you admire
Jill's thighs, Nick? So curvy, so smooth and shapely. I want to whip them. Look
how she's shaking. And crying. It's marvellous when Jill sucks my cock while
she's crying. Licking and sucking and crying. It makes me spurt right down that
crying throat. And Jill swallows it all and never stops crying."

      "Make her do it for me. Please."

      "I will."

      "Barry --"

      "I will. But I want to whip her first."

      "Barry, no. I'm sorry, please don't, please, I'll please oh god have
mercy."

      "Jill. Strip naked."

      "Christ! No pants!"

      "How do you like that body?"

      "Fantastic! I want it, I must have it."

      "Jill. Across the table."

      "Barry."

      "Do you want to lie on your back as I whip you?"

      "No!"

      "Do it. Lie on your front and I'll whip your back."

      "Christ have mercy."

      "Hold her hands, Nick. And if you want to stick your cock in her mouth
while I'm whipping her, do it. Jill will suck it for you. She'll lick it and
kiss it and suck it beautifully, and it will act as a good gag. You won't mind
that she's screaming and howling and sobbing as she sucks you, will you, Nick?"

      "Not a bit."

      "Then it'll be your turn with the whip."

      "Her breasts?"

      "If you want that."

      "No! Barry no, I --"

      "Give him your hands, Jill."

      "Oh dear sweet Jesus."

      "Do it. That's right. Hold her tight, Nick. And watch."

      "Barry please please HAUUUGGHHH! ARR! NOOOOEEEEEAAAAAIIIIIIIIII!! Barry
wait no please don't AAUUUGGGHH! NOO! Jesus god no I can't don't listen please
Barry I'll I'll OH SWEET JESUS DEAR LORD HAVE PITY HOOOAAAARGGH!"

      "Suck me, Jill."

      "Suck him, Jill."

      "Nnnnghh-nnngghh. GG. UGHHH. HOAAA."

      "Turn over, Jill."

      "No -- please."

      "Jill. Turn over."

      "All right."

      "Hold her hands tight."

      "Christ, how her breasts stand up for the whip."

      "Hit that nipple."

      "Like -- this!"

      "I can't scream any more I can't I can't cry I can't talk I'll do
anything Nick fuck me rape my cunt ravish my body I belong to you I'll crawl
I'll drink your piss I'll go down on my knees to you in front of the whole
school I'll suck your shit."

      "Fuck her."

      "Look at me, Jill, look in my eyes. I want to watch your eyes as I fuck
you, you hate this but I'm raping you watch me raping you."

      "I hate you you bastard I'm coming I hate this hate this I'm going to
come fuck me rape me I'll lick dirt I'll lick shit I'll do it I'll do it I'll
do it I..."



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