Razor7826's Second Level Two Assignment
(There are plenty of things that need to be fixed in this story that cannot be done without a COMPLETE rewrite, which was not the point of the assignment. The bulk of my edits involved polishing up the repetitive sentence structure, insertion of a more varied vocabulary, and the correction of numerous formatting mistakes. What I could not fix, however, was the frequent jumping between the perspectives of Steve and Lisa; each chapter should focus on the emotions and sensations experienced by a single character. Having the descriptions switch between Lisa's emotions and senses and Steve's makes it a generally difficult read, but, like I said, completely rewriting the chapter was not the assignment.
Despite all my changes, too many of the sentences start "He/She did this...", but fixing all of those problems would involved a complete rewrite. The story was substantially better near the end, thus the relatively few changes there.)
LISA’S REALITY by Aussiegirl
Edited by Razor7826
Chapter one - Taken
No... not again...
Fear surged through Lisa's mind and body, a painful remnant of that horrible act three months ago. Lisa struggled and screamed trying to shake free of the hand and cloth covered her mouth. She kicked her legs in the air, trying to free herself, but she would go nowhere. Her panicked breaths drew little air, instead filling her nose and lungs with the chemicals of her attackers weapon. Her thrashings turned to meager spasms, until her arms dangled calmly at her sides. Her attacker grinned a sadistic little smile and went to work on his latest assignment.
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Lisa awoke with a startle, resuming her resistance against the long-gone attacker. She quickly realized her newfound limitations, however, and tested the binds that now tethered her limbs. She tried to open her eyes to see why her arms were stuck, but she could not do that either. Trying not to panic, she tested her other arm and found it wouldn’t move either. As near as she could tell, each of her arms and legs was cuffed to the corners of a bed. A slight wind blew across her breasts and abdomen, and she realized she was naked.
“Now, now, don’t fight so, my dear. We don’t want you hurting yourself.” Lisa heard the deep male voice and froze. She began to speak the first words that came to her tongue, the light touch of a finger against her lips quieted her protests. “Shhh, don't say a word. You need to listen." Lisa nodded and the finger was removed from her lips. She felt the bed dip and realized the man was now sitting on the bed beside her; the rough denim of his jeans rubbed against her thigh. She held her breath as she felt a hand move down her neck and rest on her left breast. Her silence was broken by a small sob in response to the unseen man's manipulation of her seventeen-year old body.
Steve looked at the young girl that lay tied to the bed. The Association had been watching her for a while, and her acquisition had been unanimously agreed upon. A scout had grabbed her on her way to school that morning without complications. He knew that she was not yet fully recovered from the drug she had been given, but he had to strike while the iron was hot- this was the best time to begin to mould the girl to the role she would eventually become -- that of a slave. That is what he did- he trained slaves. He was good at it, too. His actions helped that the company keep an eye on special young women all over the state, and he was very good at recognizing the subtle signs of submission. Lisa had been marked for abduction over a year ago; it was just a matter of when to collect her. As Steve ran his hands over the soft breasts of the girl, he could feel her body shaking and her little sobs. “ Lisa, listen to me- today you left your old life behind. You will never go back to your school, your friends, or your home” He knew it was harsh, but through experience he had learned it was better to be brutal from the very start. This message was repeated over and over until they the women knew it to be true.
What did he mean?
“I ….I didn’t tttell anyone.” she sobbed quietly. She felt the man’s hand move from her breast to cover her mouth. “ I told you not to say anything, Lisa. Now I will have to gag you.” She tried to shake her head to get his hand off her mouth, but he was too strong. She felt his hand move off her mouth down to her chin to pull her mouth open. She didn’t even have time to react before she felt a hard round object being pushed into her mouth behind her teeth. It just sat there for a moment, and then she felt her head being pulled up and the ball was pulled deeper into her mouth. Lisa struggled not to panic and to keep breathing, but it was difficult. Her head was placed back onto the pillow, and she could feel tight leather straps biting into her cheeks. It took all of her concentration to breath without suffocating; she failed to hear the man speak. It was not until he grabbed her face that she realized he was talking to her again.
Steve watched the girl trying to breath through the ball gag he had just placed in her mouth. It wasn’t a large one, but the feel of the gag took some girls a while to get used to. He told her to breath through her nose, but she didn’t appear to hear him. He grabbed her face firmly, and said again, “ Lisa, just try to breath through your nose, that’s it. It isn't complicated.” He watched as she managed to slow down her breathing. “ I’m sorry I had to use the gag, but I did ask you not to speak.” He wondered a bit about what she had been trying to say, but figured that she was just trying to say she wouldn’t say anything if he let her go. He let her face go and sat back, watching her body.
She really is beautiful.
Her breasts were moving up and down with her ragged breaths and her long, dark hair was splayed out on the pillow around her head. He longed to remove the blindfold and see her eyes, but knew it was best to do that later. She had a strong, athletic build and he knew that she used to run for her school track team. However, she had quit suddenly mid season, and nobody knew why. “ Now, where was I, oh yes, you will never see your family again. You will be trained to be what you were born to be. I know that you don’t understand what I am saying, but you will in time. For now, you need to do what you are told. As you have already found out, I will not tolerate disobedience.” Steve reached out and touched the ball gag in her mouth as he said this. “ However, if you behave and do as you are told, you will find me firm but fair. Now, I am going to release you. So long as you do not fight me and try to get away, you can stretch and go to the bathroom if you need to.”
As soon as he mentioned the word bathroom, Lisa realized she needed to go-- badly. She hoped he would be quick and that it wasn’t a trick. She didn’t know what was going on, she had been sure that the same group of men that had brutally raped her earlier in the year had grabbed her again, but now she wasn’t so sure. She hadn’t been hurt, at least not yet, not like last time. She felt his hands move down her legs and tensed thinking that maybe he was just teasing, but then she felt his hand on her ankle releasing whatever it was that had been holding her there. “ Just lay still, until I undo everything. If you fight me, I’ll have to retie you, but you won’t like it much”, the man said. She just lay there, too scared to move, knowing somehow that he would do as he said. Finally, she felt her limbs released, however he didn’t touch the blindfold or gag. It seemed like she lay there for hours, but it was really only a minute or two. She fought the urge to pull her legs together, wishing he would let her stand up. Just when she thought he never would, she felt his hand on her upper arm. “Good Lisa, very good, now just stand .. slowly, you will be stiff for a while.” She was stiff and it was several minutes before she could stand up straight.
As Steve helped the girl to stand, he could feel her shaking, both with the pain of cramped muscles and with fear. He had been here many times before, but there was something different about this one. He wasn’t sure what it was, but he guessed he had plenty of time to find out. Once she was able to stand straight, he led her into the bathroom and sat her down onto the toilet. He knew many girls were embarrassed to go with him in the room, but he also knew this was something they would have to get used to. He wondered how long Lisa would be able to hold out.
Lisa was thinking the same thing. She was desperate to go, but didn’t know if she could go with him still holding onto her arms the way he was. She had not gone to the toilet in front of anyone since she was a child, but if she didn’t go soon she would burst. Not knowing how long he would be willing to wait, she started to pee. It seemed like it lasted forever and she was so embarrassed she dropped her head and cried behind the blindfold. She felt him doing something behind her head and breathed a sigh of relief when she felt the awful thing that was in her mouth being removed. She took a deep breath and wondered if he would also take off the blindfold. She felt very vulnerable, even more than when she had been tied to the bed. She began to shake and to worry about what he would do next. Like the time she had spent lying on the bed untied, the time seemed to crawl. She had no idea how long she sat there, but the longer she did the more she shook.
Steve felt her take the deep breath as he removed the ball gag. He hovered behind the blindfold, but decided to hold off for a bit longer . He knew the feeling of helplessness that it produced and wanted her to feel it fully. He felt her begin to shake as she sat and knew that she was starting to think of what he would do next. Finally he grabbed the top of her arms and pulled her to stand in front of him. Despite his earlier plans, he reached out behind her head and removed the blindfold. He saw her blink a few times trying to get used to the light and then move her eyes to look at him. What he saw were a set of the most beautiful, big blue/green eyes he had seen in a long time. He could see her fear and her pleading, and finally her tears.
Lisa felt the blindfold loosen after he let her stand up. At first the light blinded her, but soon she was able to see his face. What she saw was a man with a strong face, dark eyes and short, dark hair. She tried to see what he was thinking but only succeeded in making herself feel even more afraid. She felt her eyes fill with tears yet again and had to look away. As she put her head down, he lifted her head back up to look at him again. “Lisa, look at me. Now in time, you will always look down unless directed to do otherwise, but for now I want to see your eyes.” She found herself looking at him again, this time with tears streaming down her face. It was strange, he hadn’t hurt her but she knew that he had full control over her. It was not like before, where she had been controlled by brute force but it was still control.
“You have been very good since I removed you from the bed, so you will rewarded by being allowed to have a shower and then you can ask me three questions. Now, I will give you fifteen minutes to shower, and no more.” With that, he was gone. Lisa looked around her and saw the shower and the door through which the bed was. She had a brief thought of running out of the door and finding a way out, but quickly put that thought out of her mind as she knew he would not just let her get away that easily. This could just be a test to see what she would do. Lisa took a deep breath and made her way to the shower. Once she had let the warm water wash over her for a few minutes she remembered what he had said about asking three questions. She had so many to ask but what three would help her to learn more about her situation. She was scared to ask him straight out if he was part of the gang that had attacked her in case he confirmed her fears that he was. She was no longer so sure as he was treating her so different from how she had been treated. By the time he re-entered the room, she had just turned off the water and was looking for a towel to dry her self with. She jumped as she heard his voice.
“Here, is this what you are looking for?”, Steve asked, making her jump. He handed her a small towel. She took it and began to dry herself. He watched as she tried to cover herself, then realizing that the towel was too small just tried to do the job as fast as she could. He knew that she would feel more naked trying to dry herself then she had before, even though she had been naked all the time. When she was dry, he reached out and led her by the elbow into the other room. He sat her on the bed while he pulled a chair up to sit in front of her. He saw her watching him as he moved across the room to get the chair and sit down. Once he was settled, he asked her if she had decided on her three questions. She took a deep breath and nodded her head. Not a word had left Lisa's mouth after Steve had removed the gag nearly twenty minutes ago.
At least she seems to respond well to a little training.
“ Ok then, here is your chance, three questions. I can’t promise I can answer them fully, but I will tell you as much as I can.”
