I believe I may have made a mistake in posting the subject storyline as a new thread to "Other BDSM Stories" rather than here to "Story Ideas"! Chalk-it-up to my newness to "the Library" and to the parameters of the various topical "sub-fora", please! The substance of my post, and request for input and/or positive constructive literary criticism, is located otherwise at the topical "sub-forum" first above-listed. SORRY!
Sincerely,
... Marco. :) ;) :dunno: ;) :)
