I have always read stories but never written one of my own, as I have never really liked to write. I actually had some free time today and wrote this one. Its isnt finished by any means and may have a good bit of typos but I am proud of it so far. I really enjoyed putting it together and mabey one day it can get posted in the library here.... Thanks for any feedback and ideas.
The story (no title yet)
I am a submissive, 25 year old, preppy, white male. Smooth semi-muscular body. I have been searching for a master online for sometime. I have met a few but none of them seemed to serious about being a truly into bdsm life. I recently met a guy names marcus, a 23 year old dominate male, he sent me a message on the s4m site. He was a spoiled rich kid who just graduated college in business. He already had his own large house, drove a hummer, and not even started a job yet. He also had a stuck up, snobby, attitude which is what I for some reason liked. And he was a complete asshole. We communicated through messages off and on for a month or so. I never knew how serious I was about actually meeting him since he lived 2 hours away.. Also, given the fact of how shy I am at first meeting anyone, much less someone I will be submitting to.
I agreed to meet him on a Saturday afternoon for my session. He set some rules before our first meeting. He ordered me to respond only when spoken to. Only respond yes or no MASTER and thank you MASTER. If he just entered the room I am to kneel at his feet, place my hands on my knees, palms up and and ask, “\May I be of service to you master”. These rules also apply to any guest he have over who also are given the title ‘MASTER” or “MISTRESS” over me. At his house I will serve in roles such as his pet, slave, and personal maid. My primary dress code in a collar, black jock strap, wrist and ankle bracelet restraints. At times I may be naked or in some revealing outfit. Any infraction to his rules will result in a punishment of his choosing. He may also punish me for his own enjoyment if he wants. So can any of is guest. I am to obey anyone and everyone or else be punished. He is going to teach me my place though constant humility and obedience training. My last instruction is to wear normal clothing to his house with no underwear of any type. I am to be at his house by 1pm on Saturday.
\Saturday afternoon I prepare myself and set out on the long drive to his house. When I arrive I knock on the door and he answers. He roles his eyes and says “get in here’. I walk in and he says “I thought we had a talk about this, you kneel before me and ask if you can be of any service correct”? I replied “Yes Master”, and knelt before him hands on my knees palms up and looking straight ahead. He said “whatever, get up, take your clothes off and assume the position but with hands behind your head. He threw a black jock strap at my face and instructed me to put it on. As I did this he went into the kitchen and came back out sipping on a bud light and sat on the couch. He ordered me to hobble over to him on my knees, I did. He attached a collar around my neck, ankle, wrist bondage bracelets. Then he ordered my to put my arms behind my back and put my arms straight out tightly behind my back in an arm binder. He took a rope from the ceiling with a D ring on the end and attaches it to a metal loop at the end of my arm binder and raised the rope until I was on the tips of my toes, arms shoulders cramping from being pulled backwards. He said this is going to my first punishment for not kneeling down and asking him if he needed anything when I first arrived. He took off his belt and began spanking my ass repeatedly. It started to sting so bad and there with nothing I could do but move in a circle to try and escape his belt but he easily just stepped to the side so It did no good. I began to curse at him telling him to stop and he laughed mocking me. He stopped and asked if I was through talking shit or if I wanted more. I told him to fucking untie me. He started spanking my ass again, I tried to hobble in a circle as fast as I could but he easily kept spanking me. I began to yelp in pain and begged him to stop. Then I started to sob with tears falling down my cheeks. He finally stopped, I hung there, broken and humiliated. He asked, “Are you ready to submit to me now, or do you need more discipline’? I replied in a shaky voice “yes MASTER”. He rolled his eye and smacked my ass with his hand and asked “yes Master, WHAT”. I Replied “Yes Master, I am ready to submit to you”. He replied “That’s a smart bitch”. he sipped on his beer for another minute and said “I think I am going to give you some time to cool down, go stand in the corner with our nose touching the wall and hands on your head”. He left me in the corner for about 10 minutes sobbing. I heard him talking on the phone, apparently another dominant about his new slave saying that he was going to have to come check me out. It seemed like I was in the corner forever, I wanted to rub my butt but I dare not take my hands off my head in fear of another spanking.
I heard him ask, “Ok, get over here in front of me, and crawl please”. I crawled over to him as he sat on the couch drinking a beer. I knelt before him hands on my knees. He leaned forward and began mocking me and giving me little slaps to my face. He said “lets think of a way to show me you truly meant your submissive, start kissing my feet”. I leaned down and began kissing his shoes for about two minutes until I heard him say “I am bored with this stop kissing my shoes, kneel back up with hands about your head”. I replied “yes master”. He said “go into the kitchen and fetch me another beer.” I replied yes master and ran into the kitchen to get him a beer. He smacked my sore ass as I turned around making me yelp and he chuckled. I walked back to him, knelt down and handed him the beer. He told me to stretch my arms out straight ad palms up. He instructed me that my he was going to sit his beer on my hands as his table and if I drop it before its empty I am going to have to clean it up and then get another punishment. He took a sip and sat the bottle my hands like a table. After about 5 minutes I began to strain. He laughed mockingly and said “The punishment of dropping it is going to be a lot worse then what your scrawny arms is feeling right now. After 15 minutes he finished. He said you can go throw this bottle away now. I sighed in relief as I was able to lower my arms. I went to throw it away, then came back and knelt in front of him. He said, I think that it is time we both go get a breath of fresh air! Stand up so we can get you suited up. I replied “yes master”. I stood up, he put the arm binder back on. A Nipple clamp on each nipple with a bell on the end, and a red ball gag in my mouth. I thought to myself surely he is not going to take me outside like this but I was wrong. He attached a leash to my collar and said crawl behind me and when we get outside you lead to the middle of my front yard. I crawled out to his front yard, he said “if you have to use the restroom now is the time to hike your leg like a dog“. I replied “yes master”. He pulled me over to a tree, I hiked my leg and peed, just as I started a car drove by and honked the horn. My face grew red with embarrassment. When done he ordered me to stand up, he said “how about some exercise”? “ Like you have any choice, LOL” He said “march in place and I want those knees up”!!! I started to march. Luckily no one else passed by so far and the houses around him were somewhat separated by trees but not totality private. The house to the left of him could certainly see if they happened to walk out on the porch and really look. Just then, I saw two figures in the wood line walking from that house house……..
My master saw the look of worry on my face and said “don’t worry about them, they might mess with you some, just obey them as you would me”. I replied “Yes master”. And kept marching in place as my master went to where the two guys were standing. They looked a little younger then me, no older then 18-19, dressed in baggy skater look clothing. One had blond hair and the other dark black hair. Just then master marcus walked back inside his house and told me “Be a good slave for these guys, I am going to go inside for a little bit”. “Guys, have a little fun with him if you want“.. I stood there marching in place. They both walked over watching me march in place, the blond one holding master marcus’s riding crop. He said, “ We are not into this bdsm stuff but it could be fun”. He grabbed my nipple clamp and twisted I winced in pain. He smacked my ass with the crop and said “faster” I replied “yes master” through my gag and began to go faster, he kept smacking me sending sharp pains through my sore ass until I was going fast enough to his liking, my nipple bells starting to really ring now. Both of them laughed and said to each other “wonder how long he can keep it up”? Finally the one with black hair ordered me to stop. Out of breath I replied “yes master and stopped, standing there arms by my sides at attention. I learned the one with blond hairs name was chad and the other was adam. Chad said “um, aren't you suppose to kneel”. I said “sorry, Yes master” And knelt down, hands on my head. They looked at me and laughed. I never felt so humiliated in my life. Now master mark walked back out. He said “I hope you didn’t have to much fun with my property”. They said “yea right, he is in shape, your going to have to send him over to be our bitch maid or something sometime. Master marcus laughed and said, sure anytime after I am through training him.