I am new to this forum and am writing a follow-up story to Katie Lynch's story about Amanda at Blanke Schande College. http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/s...p?storyid=2291

My story centers around chapter 15 where Amanda's sister Kacy visits and is horrified at Dirk's abuse of her sister. I am not into bdsm as such and so have no experience upon which to base my story.

Dirk is a bully and therefore a coward and has no respect for women. He and his buddies need to be taught a lesson. My plan is that Dirk and 3 of his buddies, cowards all, will be so humiliated that they will leave the college. 2 will show some courage show shame and beg forgiveness.

Perhaps this scenario would be worked via a professional dom brought in for the purpose; perhaps she is a former student.

Any help would be much appreciated.