I have a story with its thirteenth chapter posted (Grace's Hard Lessons) - generally the story contains themes of M+/F, nc, humiliation, bdsm, blackmail etc. Have also received a number of encouraging reviews and emails since the initial posting, although they seem to have dwindled recently.

Now, there has been some suggestions from a couple of readers on developing further a couple of scenes/ideas from prior chapters. Doing this in the next few chapters will trace the submission of the female protagonist, in greater detail, from being a proud lady that has to be coerced and forced into the humiliating acts that she is subjected to, into a state where she finds herself submitting, albeit reluctantly, to be used like a slut.

However, it is a concern that spending the next few chapters on this in detail will reduce the momentum of the plot (the original plan was to progress the story fairly quickly where the protagonist will be subjected to more extreme exploitation and explicit sexual situations), and that some readers may lose interest.

I would be interested to hear from other writers on what you would do, as well as from readers, on any views or suggestions. thanks.

Dark Avenger