I'm a relatively new writer; so far I am working on one story (its called 'Iniquity' if you want to look at it).

My problem is this; the story is entirely in 1st person, from the view of the sub. I am against annoying 'time skips' where the author conveniantly skips any part s/he doesn't want to write about. On the other hand, I have trouble making the story flow, all my chapters seem like they happened in about 5 minutes, when theyre supposed to cover hours.

Any advice?