Seeking proof reader for nc humiliation story

[darkavenger]

hi,
I am working on a sequel to a story that I posted to the library earlier - entitled Grace's Very Hard Lessons. Themes of the story include nc, humiliation, public D/s, exhibitionism, blackmail, and more.

Would like to have someone proof-read the chapters I have completed before I post it. Please contact me at my email addy if you are interested. thank you.

Dark Avenger

[Stevepervy]

I'd be happy to help. Steve Pervy

[Mark Fritz]

Would like to read the story too

Mark Fritz

[RhondaLee]

The story is good, good development of the story and character.

But isn't this a fictional story? So how can there be "pictures illustrating Grace's outfits"?