Request

[Kadence]

Hallo,

I have a request for you many, talented writers. I'll try and keep it short

I've written the first chunk of a story I'd like to post but, before I take that step, I was hoping one of you kind folks would like to proof read it for me. I don't need you to comb through it looking for spelling mistakes or grammatical errors, 'cause I tend not to make them and I've read over it enough times to make sure there shouldn't be. What I need is some critique with regards to the last chapter, as I'm unsure if I like it.

Please, please PM me if you'd be willing to help me out here - I'll explain to you exactly why I'm not entirely happy with it and, hopefully, you can give me some tips as how to better improve it!

Preferably, I'm looking for an experienced author here.

Thank you for your time

[Kadence]

Thanks to Qmoq for helping me on this!

Nobody else need apply. Not that you did... :P