hello,
just started writing a new tale about a female prison being run by a bunch of lusty sadistic guards. anyone willing to give some editorial advice and be my grammar check? pm me for story. thanks!
hello,
just started writing a new tale about a female prison being run by a bunch of lusty sadistic guards. anyone willing to give some editorial advice and be my grammar check? pm me for story. thanks!
I have only done outlines of stories about Female Prisons. I would like to read your editory and provide some grammer and editorial.
Also, feel free to post it in the Critic's Circle forum before posting it.
Back!
With your fiendish books of gods
With suffering self-righteous pain
Back!
With Hell-fire and vicious rods
With repressed passion gone insane
Back!
I won't lose my soul, too.
Incomplete, I would be happy to know what you felt about the feedback I gave you, please?
Lips slip
Fingers linger
Heart starts
Well, that was quick
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