blanke schande followup

[j0ckser]

I am new to this forum and am writing a follow-up story to Katie Lynch's story about Amanda at Blanke Schande College. http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/s...p?storyid=2291

My story centers around chapter 15 where Amanda's sister Kacy visits and is horrified at Dirk's abuse of her sister. I am not into bdsm as such and so have no experience upon which to base my story.

Dirk is a bully and therefore a coward and has no respect for women. He and his buddies need to be taught a lesson. My plan is that Dirk and 3 of his buddies, cowards all, will be so humiliated that they will leave the college. 2 will show some courage show shame and beg forgiveness.

Perhaps this scenario would be worked via a professional dom brought in for the purpose; perhaps she is a former student.

Any help would be much appreciated.

[jaeangel]

The first thing you maybe should think about is sending an email to Katie Lynch and asking her if it's okay by her if you expand on a story she created. It might, it might not, but it's usually best to get permission from the aauthor before doing something like this. Especially if you're planning on sending it to the webmaster for eventual posting on the Library.
As the author myself of many fanfic/net published stories, I can tell you that depending on the tone of the request, i usually don't have a problem with people being 'inspired' by my fanfics, however, i do have a problem with someone writing, posting, and not asking me first whether it was okay. I don't like not being asked. Perhaps she might have the same thoughts, and in any case, it would still be nicer to ask.

[j0ckser]

The first thing you maybe should think about is sending an email to Katie Lynch and asking her if it's okay by her if you expand on a story she created. It might, it might not, but it's usually best to get permission from the aauthor before doing something like this. Especially if you're planning on sending it to the webmaster for eventual posting on the Library.
As the author myself of many fanfic/net published stories, I can tell you that depending on the tone of the request, i usually don't have a problem with people being 'inspired' by my fanfics, however, i do have a problem with someone writing, posting, and not asking me first whether it was okay. I don't like not being asked. Perhaps she might have the same thoughts, and in any case, it would still be nicer to ask.

I do recall sending her a note suggesting she write a sequel of some way to deal with this situation, but never received a reply. That is what got me started in the first place. If she had replied, there would have been no need for this posting.
Btw, an entire group has sprung up around the idea of BSC, with a number of people writing (not related necessarily to Katie's story, but) perhaps inspired by it.
I may have stumbled on a solution to this challenge without resort to writing about an area of sexuality with which I have no experience - and making a hash of it.
Should I complete this project, it is unlikely I will post here. BDSM is not my thing.

[jaeangel]

A note asking an author to write a sequel is not the same as a note asking the writer for permission to write your own sequel/spinoff/prequel to the author's story. Remember that. And try sending her another message. Then try sending an email to Jinn, the webmaster of this site, and ask if perhaps he has a way of contacting the author about a particular story. Every attempt should be made to contact the originator of a story before using the character/names from that story without permission.

[Curtis]

There was a story called "Owned Teacher" that was started and abandoned by author Thumb. Someone called slavenick made some inquiries, came to the conclusion that Thumb had died (this is the way I remember it, the details are in Story Feedback in the upper part of the Forum), and wrote and posted some additional chapters. When lex ludite brought to Jinn's attention that a new author was usurping this story, Jinn removed the added chapters.

As a writer-wannabe, I would be pissed off if anyone else wrote stories using my characters. I'd be irked, but not seriously pissed, if they set stories in my world using their own characters.

(As an aside, I think slavenick's work was better than the original.)

[j0ckser]

WHOA PEOPLE.

This is getting way out of hand here. I'm looking for advice about how to fit BDSM into my story, not advice about doing a take off. If you insist on following the latter, then perhaps we could take this private.

I posted here because this is where I first found the story, AND was hoping for some advice about BDSM, but as I have already said,

I it is unlikely I will post (the story) here.

I am now thinking that since I am getting nowhere, there isn't any point in returning.

Another thing to bear in mind. Katie posted her story in a public forum for which she was paid nothing. I suspect that would make her story public property. Also there are a number of other people who are writing about this situation, and although Katie's story is the best and the most extensive in describing the overall situation, it is by no means the definitive one.

[jaeangel]

Perhaps I came on a bit too strongly about spinoffs on another person's work. It's just, with me being a 'Net author myself, I know what it feels like to have my characters hijaceked, and other people might feel the same way. I sent a PM to the thread moderator, and she should be along shortly to correct me on my misconceptions.
I don't mean to 'scare you off'. You're welcome here at the Forums.
So you're looking for a scenario in which three of the guys at the College are humiliated to the extent that they will leave the college. Since college boy scenarios aren't really my thing, I might have problems with ideas...but let me sleep on it, and I'll let you know what i come up with.

[jaeangel]

While I'm chewing that over, why not wander over to the 'New Members' thread in the General Discussions Forum and introduce yourself there? You might get the attention of some more people who share your admiration for that particular story, and in any case, it might be nice knowing something about you, and getting to know something about us as a group as well. And people will probably like to meet you, anyway. There's really a nice group of people here.
Welcome to the forums!


still thinking...

[Lord Douche]

Another thing to bear in mind. Katie posted her story in a public forum for which she was paid nothing. I suspect that would make her story public property. Also there are a number of other people who are writing about this situation, and although Katie's story is the best and the most extensive in describing the overall situation, it is by no means the definitive one.

Having just done Copyright Law at Uni, I can say that her story does not, and cannot, become public property until 50 years after her death or the date of publication. By posting it on the site, she gives the site the right to publish it, that's all, just like a normal publisher. The ideas contained in the story are not protected though, which is the whole basis of fan-fiction, and you are free to use those as long as no copying of the text itself occurs.

I do think that you should contact the original author and inform her, as a simple courtesy, but there is no legal requirement for it to occur. As long as no plagiarism happens (so you can't directly copy ANYTHING from the chapter you mentioned) then you're fine.
That being said, Jinn still has the ability not to publish it here if he so chooses to. And you should make it clear that you are the author of the new story, and aren't associated with Katie.

And now...
Do you have any sort of idea what you want to have occur in the story? If you're inexperienced in BDSM... we have an entire library here of stories that you can read and learn from. Are you asking for ideas on storyline, or technical questions or what? I think the former student idea isn't bad... perhaps make her a relative of Amanda... her cousin, or sister or something?
LD