My first posted story "The cave"

[NistShadow]

First i would like to thank the two people who have reviewed it as i post this, your comments are appreciated and yours Engineer will be taken under advisement and hopefully will be acted upon, assuming i can find a nice kind English Genius who is willing to put up with my madness and proofcheck for me for nothing more then my eternal gratitude. While it is my first language, my english skills are appallingly bad...

and 2nd i would like to thank the 1521 people who have kindly read my story, since while this number probably means little in the great scheme of things realising that that many people have read something i have written and arnt emailing laughter at me is quite an ego boost.

Hope no one minds me posting this here, but it seemed like a good place to put it.

Yours Nist.

[brace [EDQ]]

As an update, it's 5,775 readers, with 7 reviewers. Batting more than 1 review in 1,000 readers might not sound like much, but it is really doing well. I really think there is a '10' story in there if the grammar and word flow improves to the point in which we can understand it.

E-mail me at bracemaiden at hotmail.com if you want more detailed info.