Domination / rape of upper-class well-dressed lady

[salpecam]

Surprised nobody has mentioned this idea.

Milady is hosting or attending a very posh private function at a manor house type location. Everyone whe is anyone is present. She is dressed in the latest expensive couture, designer labels, Manolo Blahniks etc. with an expensive hairdo. Maybe she is slightly prudish. My favourite twist is that she is an exceptionally well-preserved older lady, in the style of Helen Mirren in "the Cook, The Thief..." or maybe Joan Collins sort of things, with the long gloves etc.

The hero of the story resents her for some past injustice. He invites her into a side room midway through the party, on a reasonable pretext. There he forces himself on her using violence, mind control, blackmail or similar. Maybe he uses excessive violence just for his own pleasure, or maybe just enough to fuck her stupid, including degrading insults etc.
Dishevelled, maybe covered in semen in obvious places, messed up hair, shit on lips from ass-to-mouth, semen dripping out of anus, red face from slapping, tears in clothing, confiscated panties, she has no choice but to rejoin and attempt to continue hosting the party, or trying to be the belle of the ball.

Maybe her favoured beau whom she wished to attract figures it out and takes her to one side and hijacks the idea and does her again, to her horror. Or maybe he just gets it on with her like she wants, and finds that under her clothes she has filthy graffiti written on her body in green ballpoint by her erstwhile rapist.

For the happy ending fans she might fall under the spell of her assailant's cock or something like that. The opposing faction might have her living in fear of a repeat assault, which might even come true in a sequel.

Can I have a credit in the byline please?

[slave802120]

Or maybe he just gets it on with her like she wants, and finds that under her clothes she has filthy graffiti written on her body in green ballpoint by her erstwhile rapist.

Is there some significance about the green ballpoint?

kinkabella

[Bald_J_and_F]

We resent all stories which contain rape. Else we like the idea of a high-classed lady being dominated. For us she should be dominated by another woman of course, but that's our personal sexual preference. An excellent idea would be the high-class lady dominated by her own chamber maid or the likes.

[salpecam]

Is there some significance about the green ballpoint?

Not especially. I was originally going to say "written on her skin". Then I thought "Oh yes - in ballpoint", maybe he spotted the pen on a side table or something and just scribbled a few humiliating phrases on her in the heat of the moment.

Then I thought - No! RED ballpoint. But then I thought no again, maybe a bit symbolic, represents blood? (I'm not a fan of bleeding-related kinks, just my preference, that's all).

Then I remembered an old piece of common knowledge that angry complaints letters are supposedly written in green ink and I thought "That'll do".

[salpecam]

We resent all stories which contain rape.

OK, the pivot of the story for me is that she is very classy and posh, demure and maybe even reserved and sexually under-active; or at least that's what everyone thinks until they see her with semen in her hair, unable to sit down from the anal soreness.

Else we like the idea of a high-classed lady being dominated. For us she should be dominated by another woman of course, but that's our personal sexual preference. An excellent idea would be the high-class lady dominated by her own chamber maid or the likes.

As you wish. But the aspect of being taken by someone that she didn't even know was going to be at the party was intended to be another plot pivot, for this outing at least.

[prey4me]

This scenario is rich with themes, characters, all sorts of possibilities.

Sorry, Bald J&F--I dig rape stories. I also love victims who are true victims. That's just my little sickness--but I emphasize in various posts: if you're not role-playing with an agreed-upon script or setting, this had better be just plain old fantasy!! Check out my response to "Kelsey" on the posting "Fantasy Rape with Older Men" at http://www.about-rape.com/bbs/index.php --an alleged "13-year-old" who wants to be raped.

Yeah, right.

That said, I would cast the victim as the 16-17-year old daughter of a corrupt, evil tycoon. It's her birthday or coming-out-party, and she's being displayed by the old man as "fresh meat" to entice the sons of other tycoons, hoping to advance a business alliance.

THEN you have her enticed away from the party. Maybe an anteroom, where some kind of coercion (blackmail, business extortion maybe) is used to make her comply. As always, I say: lots of silk, yards of petticoat--throw her on her back (maybe on a settee), push her skirts up, and rip off her dainty silky pantaloons (if it's a period piece).

Then there's something to be said for dragging her down to the wine cellar, and hanging her from a ceiling hook in the chilly, dim, chamber, where nobody can hear her scream!

Another variation: have a young revolutionary (or cadre) abduct her at this wonderful moment of feminine & aristocratic prominence, and throw her into a car trunk (or across a horse) and whisk her away to the rebels hide-out, where she gets raped and converted to cause, Patty Hearst style. It could work as a gang-bang, or she becomes the leader's personal sex-toy, as with a pirate captain. By utilizing the "Stockholm Syndrom," Bald J&F, in which captives come to identify with and bond with their captors, you could work this into a rape, becoming 'reluctance,' leading to willingness" plot, although I, for one, don't usually like those.

After all, if the girl's going to be raped, make it a bonafide crime!

[prey4me]

Now this is an idea just to have a brutal experience inflicted upon a very nice girl. And I know some of you like that! The rest would rather have rape and abuse be some sadistically delightful instrument of poetic justice...Well, I just don't do that scenario.

The victim is young, sweet, and hosting her engagement party! She's wearing a soft, pastel gown--pink, mauve, or light blue, Very long, very full-skirted, and very delicate and feminine. I suggest a summer-time setting, and it's a light satin, with a sheer over-lay. The bodice is satin, and somewhat snugs over her not-yet-mature breasts, with spaghetti straps, but there is a sheer over-blouse and full, sheer sleeves leading down to ruffled cuffs.

A spurned suitor (possibly lower class than she and her fiance) crashes the party and asks, begs, to have one last word with her. He hopes to get one last opportunity to plead his case, but she wants to make him understand she will not change her mind.

You've got a psychological reality here: a spurned lover is most likely to be dangerous when he realizes that his situation is completely hopeless (think:O.J. Simpson). If you want the victim to be "deserving" of her fate, you could make her cruel and insensitive in turning him down. I would rather she sweetly, innocently tries to have him understand that he will have to get over it and look for another.

Which he will have no part of! He clamps a hand over her mouth and drags her out the back door, to the garden, and then back behind the tall, thick hedges, where he will (1) "possess"* her, at least this one time, and (2) despoil the winning suitor of his beloved's oh-so-precious virginity.

She is too confused and ashamed to tell anyone, so she puts herself back together and returns to the party an hour later, pretending that nothing is wrong.

*as a period piece, one could use all sort.s of archaic terms