I am seeking to improve my style and quality of writing. I believe myself a fine writer, but I suspect that I could use some improvement. It's not like I have reached perfection, or anything, after all. So, any feedback and opinions will be considered, as long as it is lucid, logical, and courteous. I appreciate any advice that you might have. I have 2 and a half years of experience in writing erotica and smut. Thanks again for the welcome.