First Time Writer Needs Help

[Mr Mean]

I'm about to start writing my 1st ever story. But I don't know how to start the story. My story is about a young virgin having to pay off a debt by her dad by going to a neighbor's house and be there slave. But the girl doesn't know how she is going to pay off the debt. The story is gonna be F/f. I also need a good name for the story.

[IAN 2411]

Try starting with a discription of the father and what his debt was, and the deal done to pay of the debt, then a discription of the neighbours and finally the girl. The story must be in your mind to even think about writing the story in the first place. If this is so, then as i have told others, write a list of who is going to be in the story, and where they will come into it. Write a list of the sections by writing a sentence belonging to that chapter of where the story is leading to and where it might end. Keep the reader expecting more and looking for the next page, dont be afraid to use love or humour, they do work in the correct places, but a lot of BDSM writers seem to forget this aspect of life.

Regards ian 2411

[Saheli]

I'm about to start writing my 1st ever story. But I don't know how to start the story. My story is about a young virgin having to pay off a debt by her dad by going to a neighbor's house and be there slave. But the girl doesn't know how she is going to pay off the debt. The story is gonna be F/f. I also need a good name for the story.

You can have the story be set up a couple of different ways. You can have a frame story, where there is a story inside of a story. An example is a story about someone who comes across an item and their memory of the significance of that item is the inner story. You can write it from one person's perspective (and you have 3 different types of perspectives: 1st person, 2nd person, or 3rd person narrative). You can write it from multiple people's perspectives. Like have a section from the father's point of view, the neighbor's point of view, the girl's point of view. Just some ideas.

Ian is definitely right about an outline...absolutely essential. As far as a title, I'm terrible with those. I actually turned in college papers titled Untitled, until my professor started taking an entire letter off for it, because he said it was cliche. So I don't think I'm the person to give advice on that!

[torryd]

A story can start with anything… what is your first scene? How does your character find out about the debt? Does her Dad plead with her to do this for the family? Does she find out when she’s kidnapped? Is the Dad extremely dominant and calls her into the room to meet the neighbor? Does he take her over to the house to hand her over? Is she forced or does she go willingly, feeling it’s her responsibility to save her home.

Titles… I’d have to think about it…

torryd

[js207]

I like the idea of the father misleading her - telling her the family's in a bit of financial difficulty and she'll have to help by earning some cash this weekend working for the rich woman around the corner, helping in her business. Round she goes, smartly dressed, thinking she'll be earning her family $100 as a photographer's model for the weekend, rather than $100k as a sadist's plaything for life - and by the time she finds out she's been tricked, she's already firmly locked up.

I think I'd open with the father worrying over money, but not mentioning the amount; later, he discusses it with a rich female acquaintance, who suggests there is a way his daughter could help him out - but let the reader discover the severity of their predicaments at the same time his daughter does.

[Polecat]

Think of a hot scene, not the hottest, but a hot one. Write it, but do not finish the action, leave the reader hanging; that's chapter 1. Now go to the chronological beginning of the story, that's chapter two.
Try to write as if you were going to publish it in a weekly paper, leave the reader anxiously waiting for the next chapter.