Sending Her To The Edge by Sybriate D'anguisette

[Polecat]

This is a new writer on the site, and I believe she has written an outstanding story.
It is credible. Actually the start is not so credible, but let's face it, this are short stories, not War and Peace.
Once beyond the start, the story is so hot that it is hard for me to critically review it.
There were a couple of errors like, on for one, and so. Probably due to relying too blindly on spell check; but that is nitpicking. Aside from that, the pace of the story was steady, not too slow, not rushing through.
The action was well described but not too technical. You really could feel yourself inside the action.
I am wondering if there is going to be more to this. I definitely hope Sybriate D'anguisette writes many more stories.

[Rabbit1]

Nice review ---