Very well done Silke!

Not only am I bursting to know what happens next but you didn't have any spelling errors. You also seem to have a good understanding of when and how to use commas and semi-colons. Your paragraphs are of a good length and you have used correct punctuation throughout. A Gold star to you!

Ok, your next task to is write me another piece ( or add onto this one if you wish *please*) but this time you may use your spelling and grammar check and proof read it. I will look forward eagerly to your next piece of writing.