Gregsta, that was a wonderful read. Well done. I loved the feeling and emotion you put into it.

I even have a favourite paragraph, which is:-

She looked into Sir’s eyes and saw his love and the feeling of trust and mutual understanding almost overwhelmed her and tears of joy leaked from her eyes. He reached over and brushed them away, intuitively knowing they were not tears of sadness or pain and drew her to him. He held her there for a few moments as she grounded a little, then released her so she could drink her wine. There was no need for words because it was as if they were inside each other’s minds, communicating in the unspoken language of love.

I only found one spelling error- marveled which should be marvelled. There were a few places I would have added a comma, such as the following sentence, I would put a comma after angel and another after her.

Sir then excused himself and went upstairs for a shower and angel as he liked to call her busied herself with cleaning up their dishes.

Also think about how many "ands" you use in one sentence "She turned the taps off and stepped out of the shower and dried herself then took up station in front of the mirror to do her usual critical assessment." You maybe could write it as:-

She turned the taps off, stepped out of the shower and dried herself, then took up station in front of the mirror to do her usual critical assessment.

I tend to go with shorter sentences now, if I think I am trying to add too much to any one sentence.

Overall though, you did a great job. I am happy to let Rabbit know that you are ready for level three.

Oh and thanks for the apples, I love a nice, red juicy apple!

Have fun with level 3

Aussiegirl