good job Gregsta---I will tell you it is very hard to write in a womans POV--because we do not feel what they feel ---and it is hard to put into words what you have never felt---Ruby has given you some great tips and to tell the truth I learned some things from her just now----which is good ---that is the whole point --us learning from each other

Can not wait to read your next task ---good luck and speed is not nessary --take your time we have no time limit on the course