Wow, Gregsta, I did not know whether to linger over each sentence to savour it, or try and push myself on to progress the story - looking forward to rereading it too!

Loved the interplay with the erotic and the normality - and thank you so much for the definition contained in this phase, "Being a man and suffering from domestic blindness it took him a few minutes to locate his favorite belt". Now I have a diagnosis, is there a cure?

cariad