Thanks TKH,

That was very good and I love the interaction between your two main characters! I love the idea of velvet rope too!

Only a couple of little spelling errors, fist for first and be for been, that are very easy to miss.

The sentence below was a bit long.

A tug at the last two strands from the back alerted her as to what was next as they and pulled between her legs and up through her most precious spot, along either side of the braided one, but then he spread them apart and pulled them to the sides, out to the ropes running down to her thighs from the bottom of the corset.

I think putting the ideas into two sentences will work much better.

However, overall, you did a great job. Thank you.

There is just one more thing I would like you to do, and that is to read the two articles mentioned in my ( new) level two sticky. Read these and let me know what you think of them.

Thanks again for a great story.
Aussiegirl