Oh thank you bratty, I loved it!

You did very well with no spelling mistakes and you have a great understanding of commas and paragraphs. I loved the idea behind the story and as someone who loves games and has to suffer slow downloads, I was hooked from the start. I even love pirates too!

Good to see you were able to get a friendly sheep in there too - love at first baa, very clever!

Well done! When you are ready, you can move onto the third assignment.

Aussiegirl