Offend me? No way, I'm glad you said and done it the way you did, I was able to understand what you meant that way, and if I can't take some criticism then I need to give up. Since your so honest, if you get a chance please go to http://Writing.Com/authors/silkangel and give me some feedback on those, you dont have to go into depth like you did on this one, I don't want to take up all your time