Well..Cala...
I'm wondering if you are doing a review or debating the person's views on submission with the M/s relationship.
If you're debating the woman's submission with her relationship..I'll leave this here...if you are making a comment on the story generally..then this would need to be moved to the proper forum.
I realize you were getting things off your chest with posting this..but what are you doing within this thread? Review or discussion on submission?