Quote Originally Posted by Simpson
damn! i can`t think of a good title.


Here is my idea for a opening of a story:

A 14 or 15 year old girl found some pleasure in being inflicted pain by her parent because of her foolish mistake in the house. She start to like this pain, and humilation, and want even more pain in the process.

She goes through a phrase of self discovery, by reading some stories online like bdsmlibrary.com, and than she found the courage to submit herself to her "ordinary" parent to be their servant and play thing. The parent was puzzle and do not know how to react. A twist: The father ask her to eloberate on a piece of paper how she want to be treated----- etc...
But maybe you can make a new twist. Like she invites her teacher in for tea and she finds out about the parents incest interest and helps out with the daughters pain interest. Oops sorry that has been done to.
Told you I am not a writer.