Hi DrkRvn,

I am not your level instructor and am not sure what they were looking for in your description, but I liked the images you invoked. To me, what a description should do is make me feel like I can picture what it is you are descripting. I could imagine the fun you would have had and coming from a large family, I also know what it is like meeting lots of relatives in one place!

Thanks for posting your description, it was well done.

Aussiegirl
level two instructor