Hetarys - Heh-tar-ess
Muhain - Moo-hayne
But I was thinking of changing her name, so will do that instead.
There are factors that were going to be in the next chapter that would explain what happened more ^_^ reason for this is because I wanted to jump into the scene immediately. ^^ Ill add in her appearance and see what happens.
The tempo I might not change only because I feel that it fits the mood i wanted to create, if thats okay. Thanks for the help =) Will be fixing this up tonight so I can repost.