I just got a chance to see this. It is quite good. In particular, I enjoyed the language used and the jolting contrast between the juxtaposed conversations...or was it a note she was reading? The jolt between the two made a difficult transition quite readable. Also, I will add that the language used reminds me, not a little, of the style of writing more typically used by James Oliver Curwood and other writers of his time.

There were a couple of mistakes that a proof reading would have fixed, but nothing particularly egregious.

Quite frankly, it reminded me of moments in my own life; conversations interupted by what I was reading or remembering. Very good.