Tessa,

This is an excellant story, you did a wonderful job with it. I loved the tone, and could feel the sexual tension even though there was no sex. I personally liked the way you omitted description, I think that it adds to the story when a person can imagine whatever they want. One thing that really intrigued me was that I do not even know the sex of the narrator, even though I know it was you. This truly allows me to imagine the myself in the story. Thank you for the entertainment you brought my day.