Level Two- tessa's second assignment

[anonymouse]

anonymouse, I appreciate you pointing out the ! issue. I need to watch being so casual and effusive in my writing. I'm trying, but since I tend to be that way in my everyday, it carries over into my writing. Anything else you might suggest to help with that? I'd love to hear from you.

Hi Tessa,

I understand what you mean (casual and effusive). I can get the same way too. The 'over use' of exclamation marks I referred to really only occur in this paragraph:

All that nice patrolman did was warn me to slow down. Well, he made me a few minutes late, but that was okay. I called Red and she was running late too! More than me even! I knew we’d be fast friends after that!

I've marked in red the ones I'd remove. Two exclamation marks -- hardly worth mentioning, but they stood out to me