Well, Tessa, you did a good job here! I especially liked the part where the patrolman took you from your car, cuffed you to the hood and had his way with you. Wait, that was just in my head! My bad!
Anyhow, I have no complaints about this tale or how it was presented!It flowed well and fit right in line with all the necessary momentum to keep a reader going!
By the way, you stated that Flaming Redhead is a rehead?! I am very happy to see that you have such command of the obvious! Heh!
Dean!