I'm really glad that you like it! I was afraid it was too short and incomplete but now you have alleviated my fears. I just can't burn off a firework of descriptions and adjectives like some of the better writer's here and so my writing tends to get very short. I would constantly have to look something up in my dictionary only to find a word that is inadequate to evoke the feeling that I want, look again, waste a lot of time and lose the flow. I try to make up with a compelling story and throughout thought about my characters. And it seems to work somehow (I'm still amazed).


Like I said, my story is a snapshot from a novel; just hinting at the marvelous content. But I'm afraid it will remain unwritten for quite a while at least. I'm currently writing another story that takes up all the time I find for writing.

By the way; is there something like an editor exchange (e.g.: "I edit yours you edit mine") at the bdsmlibrary? I'd like an author's perspektive on things.

Satan_Klaus