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04-30-2007 #9
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Originally Posted by gladgirl24

Thank you for the wonderful feedback everyone. What do you think of this as an alternative to the akward sentence?

The suede wraps my foot like a soft velvety chocolate melting over my tongue.

Sounds lickable to me
Mad

English does not borrow from other languages. English follows other languages into dark alleys, raps them over the head with a cudgel, then goes through their pockets for loose vocabulary and spare grammar.
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