Third assignment for Mishka

[Mad Lews]

Mishka
All and all a great intro for a story. You've taken your assignment in an unexpected direction and that will hook the reader. I know I want to find out what happens. Is it really over or is it just another beginning. Must agree with DM ( Dungeon Mistress? OH sorry Dragon's Muse) on knelt and kneeled, I've never known how to use or pronounce the latter.
On a more personal aside, try not to make Rhabbi too nervous. I know how that goes. My sally can get pretty worried when she reads some of my fiction. It's only fiction I tell her, but feelings are feelings.
Mad Lews

[Dragon's muse]

Mishka
DM ( Dungeon Mistress? OH sorry Dragon's Muse)
Mad Lews

Please, i don't have a "toppy" bone in my body (except when it comes to the dreaded comma splice or split infinitive -- then i go all bat-chyt crazy)

[Rhabbi]

Please, i don't have a "toppy" bone in my body (except when it comes to the dreaded comma splice or split infinitive -- then i go all bat-chyt crazy)

I seem to recall a few times that you were quiet hard on my stories. That was a definate Domme type thing, though I know i appreciated every comment.

[Dragon's muse]

I seem to recall a few times that you were quiet hard on my stories. That was a definate Domme type thing, though I know i appreciated every comment.

The line between Domme-type : and just plain grammar nazi is a very fine one. i think i have both feet planted very firmly on it.

[tessa]

Mishka, I felt that, all of it. Heart-rending, yet that spot of hope at the end. I'm holding on to that just now.

tessa

[Mad Lews]

Please, i don't have a "toppy" bone in my body (except when it comes to the dreaded comma splice or split infinitive -- then i go all bat-chyt crazy)

Just musing over the initials DM; sometimes serendipity is pure coincidence but other times it can be a Freudian bra, er slip, Freudian slip