I agree about the split infinitives, but the rules are there and you need to be aware of them before you break them.

As for the incomplet innumeration, it does not work that way. walls, floor, toys, ... I would do it that way, though it is probably wrong, ask muse, i am just a fellow writer.

I never knew whop served who, and to be honest couls debate either side even now. That is the best part of the story for me.