i located your story and i'm quite pleased with your Lip Service! i admit i didn't read the first three chapters but i find that it stands well on its own and i feel it has potential to continue onwards to a fifth and possibly tenth chapter if you'd like to take it that far.
From now on i will keep my eyes open for your new works as i find i definitely enjoy your style of clear, concise, and imaginative writing style! i like your way of leaving enough to the imagination so that it's not stranded in left field while trying to picture what's happening and so that it doesn't know every smallest detail and no wiggle room.
Happy Holidays and New Year, keep up the great work!