Who serves whom, third asignment by Satan Klaus

[Satan_Klaus]

I am so impressed that English is not your first language. The few awkward sentences could be attributed to this? Bravo! This piece caught my attention and kept it.

Dean told me "not to fret the language barrier too much." The truth is, I'm frequently hiding behind it, which is just stupid. I shouldn't aim for second place just because it's my second language.

The note about it not being a switch story at the end, was that intented to be part of the story? I think this is an example of explanation as a mechanism of self defense, either way. Why bother? It is a good story. If you don't want people to think it is a switch story, you will have to make it tell that part.

No it's not part of the story and in retrospect I feel stupid for saying it. The reader should make his own judgement.

Sub boy in action, sub boy failing, failed Domme subbing for this turned lazy boy...somehow a switch happened there, I hate to tell you. I have no idea how. Looks like a switch, smells like a switch... if the intention is not to wreak of a switch (conscious or uncounscious), something must be done to illustrate this. I am [I]not[I] convinced.

Why so against the story being a switch story?

It smells like a switch, yes. But are you sure? I never said for whom the chair was intended or who was going to suffer in the basement. Isn't it normal for the dom to prepare the setting and the toys? And worshipping the ground your lover is treading on doesn't necessarily mean you are submissive. It would make you a good sub for sure, but it just might make you a perfect dom. Who was serving whom? That's easy. But who was domming whom? Who knows? (God, I feel stupid for this "not a switch story comment".)

This was the effect I was going for, and it might be the reason why the story is so short. Maintaining that ambivalence was awfully hard.

Satan_Klaus

PS: This had nothing to do with tolerance, just with me trying to think for the reader, WHICH I SHOULDN'T. Can we please forget about this?