Rhabbi's first tough assignment

[Mad Lews]

It's not always just allegory or dialogue. Sometimes you have to cut entire scenes that just screw up the pacing or tone. i have had to cut some smoking sex scenes just to keep the pace or tone right.

But you saved them didn't you DM? The sex scenes I mean, for use in later stories or to trade with friends. I can see it now a swap thread for slightly used (and barely abused) sex scenes, Did I ever tell you the one about the pirate and the parrot.....

Mad