Quote Originally Posted by tessa View Post
Mr. Mad, if you expect me to make it purrrfect, please don't distract me with promises of spankings. Makes it hard for a girl to focus. That said, I didn't find one bit of your critique discouraging. Quite the opposite, actually. What I gleaned from your thoughtful comments is that I have something to work with, not something to scrap because it's just trash to toss. I will take your ideas and will be able to improve my work. Nothing about that is discouraging. My sincere appreciation (along with a full-on body-to-body hug).

Back to the cutting-board...

tessa
Shifts weight within full, wrap about, body hug, searching for proper leverage.
OK tessa no more spankings for you until you finish your rewrite.
Hope that speeds up the process for you butt you'll owe me one.
Lews