tessa's assignment- finally

[tessa]

I wrapped my legs around her kicking ones and spread them wide

Another sentence that broke the flow for me. I cannot picture this. He is on top of her, pinning her down, and somehow manages to wrap his legs around hers, and yet force hers apart. I would describe him as either straddling her, or pushing one or bothe kness between her legs to force them apart.

wrapping ones legs around another's would make leverage and thrusting problematic at best. Men much prefer to be between your legs dear, not wrapped around them.

Ok, because you both made basically the same comment about this, I will say the following:

Trust me when I say that the whole wrapping around of legs issue is quite doable and quite effective. No problematic a bit, considering the situation in which it occured. I am changing the line in the story because writing, after all, is intended for the reader. That the author knows differently is enough.