Quote Originally Posted by Satan_Klaus View Post
Dean told me "not to fret the language barrier too much." The truth is, I'm frequently hiding behind it, which is just stupid. I shouldn't aim for second place just because it's my second language.

Satan, sir, please know you are far from second place. You have something much more difficult to find than the mechanics of english;you have the spark of creativity. Reading this again, in light of your response to my comments, I wanted to say again, I like it.

No it's not part of the story and in retrospect I feel stupid for saying it. The reader should make his own judgement.


I too have had the impulse to include disclaimers or explanations with my homework. This always made me stop and reread, to see what was lacking; why was I feeling the need to explain myself? I found it was usually cause I missed something. You shouldn't feel stupid, this is a class! We are all babies learning here. Jeez, if I was worried about feeling stupid, I would never post anything I have written. Fiction is just tricky. It makes me feel very exposed. I am sorry if my comments were over zealous.




It smells like a switch, yes. But are you sure? I never said for whom the chair was intended or who was going to suffer in the basement. Isn't it normal for the dom to prepare the setting and the toys? And worshipping the ground your lover is treading on doesn't necessarily mean you are submissive. It would make you a good sub for sure, but it just might make you a perfect dom. Who was serving whom? That's easy. But who was domming whom? Who knows? (God, I feel stupid for this "not a switch story comment".)


Don't feel bad! This was good, and it got you to level three. I hope all is well and I will see you there. I guess my gut reaction was to defend my people. It is not so easy being a switch. Some folks here don't even believe in us, the way some gay's think all bi's are really gay, just still looking for the right mate. I have been told a stat that 10 percent of the population is kinky, and only one percent are considered switch. I feel kinda stupid for reacting so strongly to your comment. So now we are even?

This was the effect I was going for, and it might be the reason why the story is so short. Maintaining that ambivalence was awfully hard.

Satan_Klaus

PS: This had nothing to do with tolerance, just with me trying to think for the reader, WHICH I SHOULDN'T. Can we please forget about this?


Satan, all is filed and forgotten. You should not be so hard on your self. I can't wait to see what you have been doing in level three...

Beswitchingly