Quote Originally Posted by Rhabbi View Post
Just curious isabeau, how did you get advance notice of muse's assignment? Or did you just stick the opening she gave you on a story you already had?

I liked the story overall, but there are a few areas that need some work, I will leave these to muse's capable hands, except for one of them. As this is not yours though, I guess you can relax.



Shame on you muse, passive voice in a assignment. tsk tsk. Are we going to have to revoke your editor's card?
crap....i did do that as i've got a writer's block..and was hoping that both positive and negative comments might help me get over it..this was my second attempt at writing last year...i had used the name melanie..and it began somewhat differently and had more of an ending...will i be banned for cheating a bit?