MS Word unfortunately has its own set of formatting rules it imposes on text pasted from it into message board windows like this. To avoid those formatting issues, you need to save your MS Word doc as a plain text file and then re-open it in Notepad. Make sure 'Word Wrap' is turned off then copy and paste into here.
Looking forward to reading more of your work and yes, there's a lot of lovely people here willing to freely give of their time to help new writers develop the craft of writing.
anonymouse