Quote Originally Posted by Rhabbi View Post
Yeah, that is a bit aggravting to all of us, and I am guilty of it as well. But I cannot find the time to pull apart all the stories here.

isabeau, I will do that for your story and either post it or PM you by the end of the week.
eeks looking forward to it i think lol...i need all the help i can get so that i can begin to write with more creativity and uniqueness, which is missing..most of the stories i have written are almost direct fantasies of my own...i will be honored by both of your critiques...