Muse,
I'm a newbie here, so I'm not going to pretend to any criticism beyond whether I liked it.
-------- And I love it -------------
It make my opening pieces look so bad. It remindered me of a figure skater like Nancy Kwan: mastery of a style, just complete mastery over what was done.
I finished the piece and thought --------Beautiful-------
I hope you do add more. I don't mind being made jealous when it's so much fun to read