I do not have a problem with graphic sex. I think the question should be how much detail is too much or too little.

I have read some storys were the story was literaly " I was doing this then jill was doing that the sam was doing this etc etc etc. It is a very hard read and not very enjoyable. Then there is the opisit extreem were the detail is so high that you find your self thinking to your self Get on with it already.


That is why I dont realy like historyical storys. There is just too much detail and it bogs down the story.

A good story should have plot motive and climax (no not that climax)

another thing that I dont realy like is the whole flash back flash forward thing seperated by the ****

Authors Nock that off.