Sorry does nothing for me. But it may for others. That is ok.

What I meant by the knock that off. Was in a normal our time story. A story that has plot A motive B and climax C. They offen mix it up so that It is dificoult to follow.

It may be just me but when I want an erotic story I am not looking for weathering hights "heethcliff" She calls as she is running through the marsh's


I know It is just me but what I like in a story is he/she did this to she/he and she/he reactided by x.

I realy good auther that I like is Aurgus and powerone. They write erotica and dont have to resort to such scull dugory.

Wham bam thank you mam.

Favorite story of mine that aurgus wrote is slave daughter. Cant post it here due to the coc copywrite limitations

Look I respect your skill as an auther. I know I dont hold a candle to your great skill. I just like my storys simpler that is all.

just as to little detail will ruin a great story so will too much. That is all I meant to say.